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  1. #11
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    First, I did not expect her to actually be cute... it always just sounds like a hook for a thread. Second, voted, good luck to Anya.

    Also her votes have gone up by more than 100 since the OP.

  2. #12
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    voted. good luck. she is cute. haha hope she gets it!!
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    Definitely voted!!

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    In the time it took me to read the essay and vote 4 other people had voted for her, and I dont read slow, good job everyone. Man I wish I got to see all of those places instead of going to traditional school.
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    done and yall realize you live pretty close to me lol since i am in oviedo lol :P good luck to her though hope she gets it
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  6. #16
    I'm a PhD student and do a fair amount of writing. This is a terrible essay. I'm sorry, even for a high school student, this is just bad. Almost every sentence is a run-on. Not to mention this girl does not need a damn scholarship. Her family is clearly rich and can afford to put her through college. This scholarship should go to someone that actually needs it. Not someone who has already had the opportunity to explore half the world in high school and is simply a bad writer. There are also typos...she didn't even take the time to proofread the first few sentences.

  7. #17
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    Quote Originally Posted by redhat4 View Post
    I'm a PhD student and do a fair amount of writing. This is a terrible essay. I'm sorry, even for a high school student, this is just bad. Almost every sentence is a run-on. Not to mention this girl does not need a damn scholarship. Her family is clearly rich and can afford to put her through college. This scholarship should go to someone that actually needs it. Not someone who has already had the opportunity to explore half the world in high school and is simply a bad writer. There are also typos...she didn't even take the time to proofread the first few sentences.
    wow, I probably should have read it before I voted then...

    Edit: Now I know that you're not a PhD student.
    Last edited by Joe Fries; 04-21-2011 at 04:35 PM.

  8. #18
    Quote Originally Posted by redhat4 View Post
    I'm a PhD student and do a fair amount of writing. This is a terrible essay. I'm sorry, even for a high school student, this is just bad. Almost every sentence is a run-on. Not to mention this girl does not need a damn scholarship. Her family is clearly rich and can afford to put her through college. This scholarship should go to someone that actually needs it. Not someone who has already had the opportunity to explore half the world in high school and is simply a bad writer. There are also typos...she didn't even take the time to proofread the first few sentences.
    Rude and uncalled for....Her mom is a flight attendant, she can get basically free stand-by flights to anywhere in the world. That is the only reason they/we have traveled so much. When we travel, we literally eat bread and cheese the whole time.

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  10. #20
    Quote Originally Posted by Joe Fries View Post
    wow, I probably should have read it before I voted then...

    Edit: Now I know that you're not a PhD student.
    haha "wow, I probably should have READ it before I voted,,,,,,,then..." I'm not a PhD student huh? Please. What are you doing with your life? Even if her family is not well off, it is not a good essay. Read it. It's not rude, it is simply the truth. There are more talented students who are much worse off, who actually have written coherent essays.

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