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    F.i.n.e.

    F.I.N.E.
    “Feelings inside not expressed”

    I'm not gonna change a single thing I'm doing
    and I don't need your approval
    and I ain't ask if I'm staying on task
    doing these things the way they're supposed to be done
    like in the past
    there's no need for suspense
    keep your two cents
    matter fact I'll give you back everything that you lack
    you've got a thing for stabbing me in the back
    I gave you everything I had on the track
    I gave you two years I'll never get back
    call this a fact
    I got beat by your ways
    so I picked up an axe and hacked
    every tie that we had
    then took a bat to the telephone jack
    communications now a thing of the past
    I poured kerosene on all that we had
    then lit a match, stood back
    and let the fire turn the walls to wax
    this ain't a game - this is my plan of attack
    I'm leaving you and I'll never be back
    I hope this words makes the memories stack

    I'll admit - I was caught in the mix
    knee deep in your games
    addicted to your love
    boy I loved me some pain
    you took my dreams and you held me back
    that little bit of innocence i had now i've gotta say I grew up fast
    you're nothing but trash
    I hope you burn and they loose your ashes
    and you're forgotten
    i hope your history never remembers what you brought it
    you're a thief and you lie
    you had me hooked on your high
    i thought i was fine - blind in both eyes
    you made me think i could fly
    before I knew it i forgot what the sky even looked like
    you're sick - you're wicked
    habits you slip quick
    harder to quit
    you take a little bit of truth and give it a twist
    it seems so right in the moment
    so it's hard to resist
    but then you hit in the face with a brick
    where did I trip? What did I miss?
    to unaccountable memories - I dedicate this...
    Last edited by HavkinKnight; 10-19-2010 at 02:37 AM.
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    Very nice.

    You have a typo in the third to last line. I'm guessing 'they' should be 'then'.
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    i liked it. very good
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    good job

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    Inspiring. I used to write stuff like this a LONG time ago. Maybe I should start again.

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    nice... great post
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    Wow man that was awesome. Really inspirational Great rhyming too.
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    I wonder if Havkin excelled in his Honor's English classes?!?! You realize this sounds very "Thoreau." Is he a favorite poet of yours?
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    Quote Originally Posted by xMortyZx View Post
    I wonder if Havkin excelled in his Honor's English classes?!?! You realize this sounds very "Thoreau." Is he a favorite poet of yours?
    im an writer lol i loved English (creative writing) altho my spelling is REALLY BAD!
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    Really intense, I liked it. Reminds me of Odd Future (Band). You should add some more writings on here.


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